Explain how Hector is shown in a heroic way in this passage.
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A strong 10-mark answer should make 5 separate references to the text, explaining how Homer presents Hector's heroism through various techniques. Each point should include quotations and analysis.
Point 1: Worthy of divine attention
Hector is shown heroically through the attention of the gods. The fact that 'Zeus who marshals the clouds' watches him specifically elevates Hector above ordinary mortals - being worthy of observation by the king of gods marks him as exceptionally important. Zeus even grants him special favour: 'for the moment at any rate I grant you supremacy'. This divine empowerment shows Hector as chosen and exceptional. When 'the savage spirit of the terrible War-god now entered him' and 'power and fresh vigour filled his limbs', Hector literally becomes filled with divine martial energy. This possession by Ares demonstrates his status as the ultimate warrior, heroically empowered beyond normal human capability.
Point 2: Impressive martial achievement
Homer presents Hector's heroism through his battlefield prowess. Zeus himself acknowledges that 'it was you that killed his comrade, brave and gentle Patroclus' - having the king of gods recognise this achievement validates Hector as a formidable warrior. The fact he defeated a major Greek hero shows genuine martial excellence. Additionally, Hector now wears 'the arms of godlike Achilles', which he won from Patroclus. Possessing the armour of the Greeks' greatest warrior is a visual symbol of his victory and prowess. The detail that 'the armour fitted Hector's body well' suggests he is physically equal to Achilles, further emphasising his heroic stature and capability.
Point 3: Visually magnificent and inspiring
Hector is shown heroically through his impressive appearance. He 'presented himself before all of them, resplendent in the armour of great-hearted Achilles'. The adjective 'resplendent' creates an image of brilliant, glittering magnificence - Hector looks like a hero should look, inspiring and awe-striking. His 'piercing war-cry' is another traditional heroic attribute, demonstrating his ability to intimidate enemies and rally allies through sound alone. This combination of visual and auditory impact shows Hector as the complete heroic package - someone who both looks and sounds like a legendary warrior, fulfilling the heroic expectation of being impressive and terrifying on the battlefield.
Point 4: Heroic leadership and generosity
Homer presents Hector's heroism through his leadership qualities. He personally went 'up and spoke to each of them in turn' to 'rouse their spirits', showing he cares about inspiring his men individually rather than merely commanding from a distance. His offer to share glory demonstrates heroic generosity: 'I will give half the spoils, keeping the other half myself, so that he will share the glory equally with me'. The emphasis on 'equally' shows Hector is not motivated by selfish desire for honour but genuinely values his warriors' achievements. He also admits 'I impoverish my own people' to provide gifts for allies, demonstrating his commitment to maintaining morale even at personal cost. These leadership qualities - inspiration, generosity, and dedication - are all traditional heroic virtues.
Point 5: Defensive hero fighting for noble cause
Hector's heroism is enhanced by his motivation and acceptance of fate. He explains he wants men 'in defence of the women and little children of Troy', showing his heroic purpose is protecting his family and city rather than aggressive conquest. This defensive motivation makes him sympathetic and admirable - he fights for those who depend on him. His command 'Turn, then, and straight at the enemy, every one of you, to live or die! That is the intimacy of battle' shows fearless acceptance of mortality, a key heroic quality. The phrase 'to live or die' demonstrates he doesn't flinch from death but embraces it as part of warfare. Even Zeus's recognition that Hector is doomed ('Little knowing how close you are to death') contributes to his heroism - he is a tragic hero, fighting bravely despite inevitable doom, which makes him more rather than less heroic.