by Lawrence McNally
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The Explorer's Daughter - Kari Herbert

Herbert writes about her experience watching a narwhal hunt in the Arctic

As a small child, Herbert lived, with her family, among the Inughuit people (sometimes called Inuits, or Eskimos) in the harsh environment of the Arctic. In 2002 she revisited the area, staying near Thule, a remote settlement in North Greenland. In this passage she writes about her experience of watching a hunt for the narwhal, a toothed whale, and what she thought and felt about it.
[1] Two hours after the last of the hunters had returned and eaten, narwhal were spotted again, this time very close. Within an hour even those of us on shore could with the naked eye see the plumes of spray from the narwhal catching the light in a spectral play of colour. Two large pods of narwhal circled in the fjord, often looking as if they were going to merge, but always slowly, methodically passing each other by. Scrambling back up to the lookout I looked across the glittering kingdom in front of me and took a sharp intake of breath. The hunters were dotted all around the fjord. The evening light was turning butter-gold, glinting off man and whale and catching the soft billows of smoke from a lone hunter's pipe. From where we sat at the lookout it looked as though the hunters were close enough to touch the narwhal with their bare hands and yet they never moved. Distances are always deceptive in the Arctic, and I fell to wondering if the narwhal existed at all or were instead mischievous tricks of the shifting light. ...
[2] The narwhal rarely stray from High Arctic waters, escaping only to the slightly more temperate waters towards the Arctic Circle in the dead of winter, but never entering the warmer southern seas. In summer the hunters of Thule are fortunate to witness the annual return of the narwhal to the Inglefield Fjord, on the side of which we now sat.
[3] The narwhal ... is an essential contributor to the survival of the hunters in the High Arctic. The 1 mattak or blubber of the whale is rich in necessary minerals and vitamins, and in a place where the climate prohibits the growth of vegetables or fruit, this rich source of vitamin C was the one reason that the Eskimos have never suffered from scurvy. ... For centuries the blubber of the whales was also the only source of light and heat, and the dark rich meat is still a valuable part of the diet for both man and dogs (a single narwhal can feed a team of dogs for an entire month). Its single ivory tusk, which can grow up to six feet in length, was used for harpoon tips and handles for other hunting implements (although the ivory was found to be brittle and not hugely satisfactory as a weapon), for carving protective 2 tupilaks , and even as a central beam for their small ancient dwellings. Strangely, the tusk seems to have little use for the narwhal itself; they do not use the tusk to break through ice as a breathing hole, nor will they use it to catch or attack prey, but rather the primary use seems to be to disturb the top of the sea bed in order to catch Arctic halibut for which they have a particular 3 predilection . Often the ends of their tusks are worn down or even broken from such usage.
[4] The women clustered on the knoll of the lookout, binoculars pointing in every direction, each woman focusing on her husband or family member, occasionally spinning round at a small gasp or jump as one of the women saw a hunter near a narwhal. ... Each wife knew her husband instinctively and watched their progress intently; it was crucial to her that her husband catch a narwhal — it was part of their staple diet, and some of the mattak and meat could be sold to other hunters who hadn't been so lucky, bringing in some much-needed extra income. Every hunter was on the water. It was like watching a vast, waterborne game with the hunters spread like a net around the sound.
[5] The narwhal ... are intelligent creatures, their senses are keen and they talk to one another under the water. Their hearing is particularly developed and they can hear the sound of a paddling kayak from a great distance. That ... was why the hunters had to sit so very still in the water.
[6] One hunter was almost on top of a pair of narwhal, and they were huge. He gently picked up his harpoon and aimed — in that split second my heart leapt for both hunter and narwhal. I urged the man on in my head; he was so close, and so brave to attempt what he was about to do — he was miles from land in a flimsy kayak, and could easily be capsized and drowned. The hunter had no rifle, only one harpoon with two heads and one bladder. It was a foolhardy exercise and one that could only inspire respect. And yet at the same time my heart also urged the narwhal to dive, to leave, to survive.
[7] This dilemma stayed with me the whole time that I was in Greenland. I understand the harshness of life in the Arctic and the needs of the hunters and their families to hunt and live on animals and sea mammals that we demand to be protected because of their beauty. And I know that one cannot afford to be sentimental in the Arctic. 'How can you possibly eat seal?' I have been asked over and over again. True, the images that bombarded us several years ago of men battering seals for their fur hasn't helped the issue of polar hunting, but the Inughuit do not kill seals using this method, nor do they kill for sport. They use every part of the animals they kill, and most of the food in Thule is still brought in by the hunter-gatherers and fishermen. Imported goods can only ever account for part of the food supply; there is still only one annual supply ship that makes it through the ice to Qaanaaq, and the small twice-weekly plane from West Greenland can only carry a certain amount of goods. Hunting is still an absolute necessity in Thule.

Overall PAVLS Analysis

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Purpose - Why Herbert Wrote This

Herbert's purposes evolve through the passage:

To explain Arctic survival:
"The narwhal is an essential contributor to the survival" - Shows hunting is necessity, not choice
To challenge Western assumptions:
"How can you possibly eat seal?" - Addresses Western criticism directly
To share moral complexity:
"This dilemma stayed with me" - Shows her own conflicted feelings

Audience - Who She's Writing For

Herbert addresses multiple audiences:

Western readers unfamiliar with Arctic life:
"Distances are always deceptive in the Arctic" - Educates about environment
Critics of Arctic hunting:
"I have been asked over and over again" - Responds to common criticisms
Those seeking understanding:
Detailed explanations of narwhal uses - For genuinely curious readers

Voice - How Her Tone Changes

Notice Herbert's evolving voice:

Wonder and awe:
"took a sharp intake of breath" - Childlike amazement at beauty
Informative teacher:
"The narwhal are intelligent creatures" - Educational, factual tone
Conflicted observer:
"my heart leapt for both hunter and narwhal" - Torn between cultures
Defensive advocate:
"one cannot afford to be sentimental" - Firm, protective of Inughuit

Language - Technical Choices

Herbert's language creates vivid effects:

Magical imagery:
"spectral play of colour", "glittering kingdom" - Fairytale quality
Sensory description:
"butter-gold light glinting" - Rich visual and tactile imagery
Metaphor:
"vast, waterborne game" - Hunt as strategic game
Technical vocabulary:
"mattak", "tupilaks" - Authentic Inughuit terms

Structure - How It's Organised

The passage's structure builds understanding:

Beauty to necessity:
Opens with magical description, moves to survival needs
Pivotal moment:
"And yet at the same time" - Turning point revealing conflict
Circular resolution:
"This dilemma stayed with me" to "absolute necessity" - Returns to defend hunting
Final emphasis:
"Hunting is still an absolute necessity" - Conclusive statement